Front cover: Use the image as the background for the whole page. Don't use boxes. Try make more effective use of font - it needs to be more conventional to the genre of music. You need to use one disctinctive font for the masthead, and two or three fonts for the coverlines. You also need to add a date to the cover.
Add page numbers to the contents page and double page spread.
On the contents make your use of font more conventional, and tidy up the layout and presentation.
On the double page spread use one image filling the left hand page. Look again at you use of fonts and colours.
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Front cover:
Use the image as the background for the whole page. Don't use boxes. Try make more effective use of font - it needs to be more conventional to the genre of music. You need to use one disctinctive font for the masthead, and two or three fonts for the coverlines. You also need to add a date to the cover.
Add page numbers to the contents page and double page spread.
On the contents make your use of font more conventional, and tidy up the layout and presentation.
On the double page spread use one image filling the left hand page. Look again at you use of fonts and colours.